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The End Of Time Part One: The Verdict

Published Saturday, Dec 26 2009, 09:06 GMT | By Ben Rawson-Jones | 127 comments
The End Of Time Part One: The Verdict
Can someone please get an Ood to clarify whether ‘The End Of Time Part One’ was a bad dream in itself? If not, then someone had better tell Matt Smith and Steven Moffat to get a bloody move on. More bloated than The Master after stuffing that turkey down his neck, the opening part of David Tennant’s final adventure was an unfocussed disappointment, albeit with several strong moments along the way and the promise that the real action and story still awaits.

Doctor Who is at its best when you can see the danger developing, as in the brilliant ’The Waters Of Mars’. Here, the plot felt overly contrived and convenient. Contraptions such as the Immortality Gate and the potions that resurrected The Master were conjured up all too conveniently amidst a veil of gobbledygook. In conjunction with The Ham Factor winner Joshua Naismith and two green aliens that appeared to wander in from the set of Chucklevision In Space, it was hard to immerse oneself fully in the ensuing events.

A lack of engaging material was noticeable throughout the hour, with a series of fairly disjointed scenes and minimal momentum. Some of the subplots felt ill-conceived and alienating, such as Barack Obama’s recession-busting plan that appeared to waste a lot of screen time purely for the purpose of one supposed pay-off shot featuring the President's transformation into The Master. Meanwhile, the imprisoned Lucy Saxon’s reunion with her former partner was overly melodramatic and a throwback to the worst of 80s Who.

In addition, the episode felt more stretched than Lady Cassandra’s face. A good 15 minutes could have been chopped out with neglible difference to the plot and characterisation. How much do we need to see of The Master stuffing his face? How many sepia-tinted close-up shots do we need of The Master’s laughing mouth? We get the idea! Similarly, the grand reveal of the ‘master race’ was overlong to the point of numbness. Still, the idea itself was bonkers but brilliant. As for the return of the Time Lords, that development might have meant a lot to the many devoted fans of the show but would have elicited a big shrug from the millions of casual viewers who tuned into the show on Christmas Day, looking for some escapist fun rather than self-indulgence.

Amidst the narrative mess, John Simm’s portrayal of The Master was highly watchable - although his new superpowers felt a bit superfluous and made him look like some kind of Heroes-reject. In lesser hands, the role could have easily have been that of a one-dimensional villain without the moments of pathos Simm brings out.

The reliable David Tennant and the delightful Bernard Cribbins shared some nice moments together and it was great to see Wilf take on more prominence in the plot. Their scene together in the café, where they observe Donna’s altercation with a traffic warden, was a fine example of the Russell T Davies era at its best. The dialogue between the world-weary pair, and the sadness and longing in their matching puppy dog eyes, was very moving indeed.

Occasional moments of humour helped to lighten the tone. These included June Whitfield’s Minnie menacing The Doctor’s derriere, the new locking system for the Tardis and the sheer amount of spittle generated by Timothy Dalton during his closing speech. Are we to take it that Gallifrey actually perished due to flooding? On a dryer note, the former 007’s narration gave the episode an epic feel that wasn’t otherwise merited by the story.

While the episode may have been a bumpy hour when judged on its own, it undoubtedly placed all the key pieces in a tantalising position ahead of the story’s resolution on New Year’s Day. After all, out of the tedium of ‘The Rise Of The Cybermen’ emerged the brilliant ‘The Age Of Steel’ the following week. Let’s hope that ‘The End Of Time Part Two’ gels together better than its opening instalment and gives Russell T Davies and David Tennant the spectacular send off they both thoroughly deserve.

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the master, on January 2nd, 2010
CAN SOMEONE TELL russel t davies THAT I HATE HIM HE IS AN AWFUL WRITER AND I'M GLAD HE IS GOING FOR GOOD.
Handyman, UK, on January 2nd, 2010
With a title like 'The End of Time,' I was expecting something great, but then I should have known better as it was written by RTD! If anyone has lost the plot of Dr Who it's him. The basic idea was good, and the cast did their best with an absolutely terrible script. Half the episode was taken up with the Doctor aimlessly running around. Perhaps he was looking for the plot too! Will the second part be any better? Not if RTD has anything to do with it. (Watched it tonight, but that's for a different review.) I hope the new team return to what the Doctor does best, beat the bad guys.
Katy, UK, on January 1st, 2010
Agreed, so boring I just wanted to leave the room until it was over. I almost always love Doctor Who, too.
Emma - swansea, on January 1st, 2010
I was in continuous tears at the end of part 2 and am SO gonna miss david
Mike Manchester, on January 1st, 2010
Just saw it again in a lunchtime repeat. Seems much better than first time round. Maybe too much expectation? Even pants as an Xmas gift turn out to be useful. I think it was intended to be confusing, which it was. Second viewing is less annoying, now you know where it is going. Sure, grey cloak and 'Harry Potter' Master etc. seem a bit too keen to pull in a wide audience, but overall better. A solid six, where before I thought a poor four! Anyway, one thought occurs - the Master as messiah. Second coming, Christmas day, humanity reborn in his image. Is that the role he is unaware of? Must he die to save us? And who else...? Dalton's spit at the end is still yuk, but left the second viewing looking forward to part two. Happy New Year!
Theo Widnes, on January 1st, 2010
To be honest I loved this episode I felt it had a really strong dark theme running through and the comedy moments from such people as june whitfield broke up the darkness allowing for some fun on Christmas day. Again I found john simm as the master to mesmerising especially the contrast to the last time we saw him where he was all powerful. I found the cafe scene fantastic and poignant and showed what a brilliant wrtiter davies is. I found master race scenes the perfect length outling the bleak outlook for the doctor. And to everyone slating davies he is marvellous not only at writing but overseeing every episode and without him there would be no doctor who at all.
Harry,UK, on December 31st, 2009
It made no sence what so ever, I had to wach it 3 times on BBC iplayer
Darren, UK, on December 31st, 2009
I think whoever thought up the Masters powers has been playing too much inFamouse on the PS3!!
Andrea, Portadown Northern Ireland, on December 31st, 2009
So many of you are disappointed with 'The End of Time' Part One and that makes me so sad. For me, it is all about the Doctor, nothing else matters, and in every episode I look for what we learn about him. As far as I'm concerned the best episodes are when we discover something new that advances our understanding of him and bonds us to him. I believe this episode was successful in this respect. I loved the way the Doctor was trying to forget his inevitable demise by going on a Tardis bender/cruise, even getting married -how I would have loved to have seen that. He was amusing himself by doing flippant, trivial things- the new way of locking the Tardis etc. and this contrasts wonderfully with the Doctor always having serious business to contend with, just how many times has he saved the world and everywhere else besides? I loved the poignancy of his conversation with the wonderful Wilf in the cafe. He showed us his frustration, that even though he has achieved so many great things in his time, he can't do anything about his own death - that makes him the same as the rest of us. We all presumed that the Doctor did not fear death because of regeneration but in this important episode he tells us different. He misses Donna deeply, we see in his eyes the longing for his best friend and true soulmate. For me, Donna has been the best Doctor's companion and no mention of Rose - hurray. John Simm was amazing as the Master and how fantastic for him to get to play a part incomparable to any other. The return of the Time Lords made my jaw hit the floor. I can't believe that people appear to be distinctly underwhelmed by this. I was aghast. This is THE biggest story to ever happen in the history of Doctor Who. I will admit that I am apprehensive about how it will be handled, my nerves are Gallifreyed. Timothy Dalton's narration was haunting and atmospheric, reminiscent of Richard Burton in 'Under Milk Wood'. He has played Heathcliff, James Bond and now he's a Time Lord big cheese taking about something vast stirring in the dark - he did it for me. All that spitting, that's passionate oration for you,people, a la King Lear. Mr Dalton, I salute you sir, you were fabulous. Absorb what is valuable and disregard the rest. David Tennant's depiction of the Doctor has been definitive and sublime. When he leaves us something will be lost forever.
Brad, on December 31st, 2009
I want to know how the Doctor's mum knows Wilf and got on the tv to talk to him.
D, USA, on December 31st, 2009
Spot on with the critic. I love Doctor Who and have watched every episode, movie and spinoff and I hate to say it but for once I agree with the critics. The Master Race... oh, please.
Sose, Australia, on December 31st, 2009
Good things and not-so-good things about this episode. Good included: The return of John Simm & Alex Moen. Also, the return to an extent, of Donna Noble. Bad included: The ample references to a Skywalker v Vader face-off, constant shots of Simm ravaging meat like he's been on drugs and has the munchies, the awful acting of the Naismiths and Wilf's posse of the elderly out on their excursion. Like the reviewer, I thought that if they cut about 15min out of this ep, it probably would have been as powerful. But, who's to stop RTD when he gets carried away? It made me feel very uncomfortable to see the Doctor, obviously so afraid of his death, acting as careless as he did in the beginning; as did watching him almost break into tears during his conversation with Wilf. I think that's a testament to David Tennant's acting capabilities. Surprisingly, I found Sylvia Noble to be quite tolerable in this episode, which is odd because in the past I've wanted to pummel her as much as anyone. Wilf was always bound to be enjoyable, as Bernard Cribbins always is. I thought Catherine Tate provided a very good performance as a smaller character in this story, I was a bit worried that her usual presence would overshadow a lot of the other themes of the episode, but she was able to hold herself and let the others take the reins. As for Timothy Dalton...I think the whole return of the Time Lords was a big reveal (duh), but to people who've just come to the show, I can imagine a lot of people will be scratching their heads and letting out a massive yawn. I mean, they've brought back the Master, who's already been resurrected once in the new series; and the Daleks have been so overdone that they had to be driven to a genocidal end, most likely so they can be miraculously be brought back 30 years down the line. The Time Lords are the only race, really, that have been put into the scope of the new series, which would ring bells with both old and new fans. I would rather have seen some REAL oldies like the Ice Warriors or something return, but I guess since we're reaching the near end of the Time Lord's regeneration cycle, why not bring back his people. For me, I got a wee bit excited seeing the whole Senate at the end of the episode, but I did get the slight feeling I'd seen scenes like it before watching Star Wars. Bringing me to the face offs between Ten and the Master. From the end of Series 3, it looks NOW like they're on more equal ground vunerability-wise than they have been ever before. Wasn't too keen on Ten's all of a sudden realisation of the drumbeat in the Master's head being as strong, same with the Heroes-esque powers the Master has suddenly been equipped with. In saying that, it gave me chills to see Tennant and Simm opposite each other again, I simply love their performances. I just hope the final part contains three things: No overblown cameos, more Master/Doctor interraction and a fitting exit for Tennant. When I say 'fitting', I mean 'no cheese'. I just know now that Matt Smith is going to be slayed when he appears at the end, and I feel for him already; because I have faith he'll make it his own, given the chance. It'll be weird if everyone but Martha is present (which is what it's looking like at the moment), considering she had a major role in defeating the Master the first time round. That's not just me being a Freema/Martha fan, I just think it'd be odd if she wasn't there. Roll on EoT Pt II!
Graham ,Runcorn, on December 30th, 2009
not bad, but a little hard to follow in places, David, still as good as ever, the cast all worked well, John Sim was good, but something was lacking , hope it get all sorted on New years day
Alice, on December 30th, 2009
WHAT DO YOU MEAN, HEROES-REJECT??!!??
Liam Sheils, Liverpool, on December 30th, 2009
Spot on review. I felt like writing a review just to highlight all the things I found wrong with the episode. Now I don't have to. This reviewer agreed with nearly everything I thought when I saw it! Except, for instance, me finding the June Whitfield scene forced. When she said "I certainly had [been in trouble] wahay!" I cringed at how bad the acting was. I know she's a renowned actress but she's not beyond criticism even so. And it's true, why was every single scene milked for so long! Davies has talked about writing episodes at the last minute! It was definitely one of those, he obviously ran out of time so decided to spend five minutes showing people having their heads spin around ludicrously and then John Simm wave and grin for another five. I actually quite liked the Heroes-type effects, I only felt that they didn't go far enough. Maybe the doctor should have been instilled with similar powers when he absorbed the electricity and then we could have had the epic superpowered showdown that that other show often promised but has yet to give us. There were moments of greatness here which is what made the 75% that was awful especially unbearable. Dalton made for a great Lord of the Rings-style narrator (but why did they have a shot of The Master as Gollum, lol?) and I look forward to seeing more of the former 007 (hilarious Gallifrey-flooding observation though by the way). Also, I really hope they get rid of Murray Gold as composer after this year. I find his score so intrusive and frequently daft. It makes even thrilling scenes seem like the Keystone Cops sometimes. He can still do the main theme tune but I really hope they get someone else for the incidental music. His only good episodic work I can recall was his fantastic score for the equally amazing Impossible Planet two-parter.
Mark, York, on December 30th, 2009
John Simm-the most terrible hammy acting I have ever had the misfortune to watch!!
Tara, USA, on December 30th, 2009
Nice. Completely full of sh*t, but hey, that's what TV critics are for.
James, Lincolnshire, on December 30th, 2009
Well here's a shock I don't agree with anything this reviewer says as usual. I thought the episode was excellent and can't wait for the next one.
Jason, Luton, on December 30th, 2009
If it weren't for reasonable acting and superb BBC production quality and cinematography; Dr Who of recent times would be complete dross. That recent episodes have been watchable is more 'despite RTD' than because of him. It's a shame to see good cast and production crew talent largely being wasted but they can only work with the material they are given.
Richard Oakley Blackburn, on December 30th, 2009
What was that? I asked myself on Christmas Day and not in a good way. I tried to make sense of it in the days that have followed the end of Time Part 1. What significance do the Tardis and Notebook have in a 13th century stained glass window? Last we saw of that book, it was left on the Library Planet guarded by the Veshta Nerada. What happened to the ring used in the masrter's resurrection? The master is not wearing it at any point in the show? Lucy Saxon grabbed it, perhaps. Did the gate cure the Master of his madness? if not the new Master Race is going to start using its powers on each other or themselves. The credits suggested that Timothy Dalton is Rassilon? Since the Timleords overthrew and imprisonned their former Emperor this would seem to be a big error of judgement on their part as he had become quite, quite mad. Is this White Guardian on the level? The last one the Doctor encountered was really black and had to be replaced. Is the Doctor's survival necessary so that the demon is smoted or this a paradox? We know that the Master has always heard the drums since he looked into the time vortex. We know that the Timelords resurrected him to fight in the Last Great Time War. He fled and died. Now, resurrected again, he appears ready to fight for the Timelords and has converted 6 thousand million humans into cannon fodder for the Last Day of the Last Great Time War against the Daleks. The biggest mystery, though, was what had DT done to River Song's Doctor? Where was the man theat whole armies fled in terror. The man who commanded the Tardis with a snap of his fingers/ A key fob is just not the same. Where was the Timelord Triumphant promised at the end of the Waters of Mars? I am really disappointed RTD could not write him that way. Instaed we had the Doctor buffoon, lately come it appeared from Hawaii. The blubbering doctor telling Wilf he had done some things that hadn't gone well. The Doctor Gormless as the Master stood in the gate, not once reaching for the soic screwdriver - for he knows this must be. We've seen the attempt the Daleks made to undo their end in the Last Great Time War. I reckon it's only right we should see the Timelords attempt to avoid going into extinction. Who's been accelerating the Ood's progress? My guess would be Dalek Ca'an. He's still helping the Doctor. With so many rmoured cameos, it is llikely that End of Time part 2 will be very disjointed and as much a disappointment as part 1 was to me.

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